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Tip # 184: Make sure the pronouns you are
referring to in your sentences are clear.

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Tip # 184: Make sure the pronouns you are referring to in your sentences are clear.
For example:

Unclear:
Whenever it rains, it always makes that funny noise.

Clear:
Whenever it rains, the furnace always makes that funny noise.

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The following sentences contain ambiguous pronouns.
Please rewrite the sentences to make the pronoun reference clear.

  1. When Alice saw Marion, she told her that she was going to help her with the project.
  2. I saw a clown and a monkey who had a small car filled with circus performers.

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