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Tip # 204: Here is another error people make
in writing their resumes:

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Tip # 204: Here is another error people make in writing their resumes: a flowery or general objective statement. Many candidates lose their readers in the beginning. Statements like "A challenging position enabling me to contribute to organizational goals while offering an opportunity for growth and advancement" are overused, too general and waste valuable space. If you’re on a career track, replace the objective with a tagline stating what you do or your expertise.

Please answer Bob's question:

Over the years I've heard countless people use the word "flounder" when the context suggests that they should be using "founder." Could you address the proper use of these two words? It drives me crazy when even well-known reporters say that a company is "floundering", which is a form of fishing involving a spear.

Many thanks,
Bob Schaettle

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