Bull's Eye Business Writing TipsTip
#226: Do not use vague
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Tip #226: Do not use vague adjectives when specific ones are needed.
For example:
Vague: We received numerous inquiries.
Better: We received 145 inquiries.
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Rewrite the following sentence so it is clear and parallel:
In Florida, where the threat of hurricanes is an annual event, we learned that it is important (1) to become aware of the warning signs, (2) There are precautions to take, and (3) deciding when to take shelter is important.
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