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Tip # 450:  Which is the preferred style for news releases?

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Tip #450:  Which is the preferred style for news releases?:  “Three people or persons were involved in the project.”  The Associated Press Stylebook prefers the word “people” to “persons” in all plural uses.

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This week’s quiz:

Which word is incorrectly used in the following sentence?

"From our 47-story Atrium to our unique décor to our sumptuous dining, the incredible XYZ Hotel is now the penultimate business travel experience”?



Quote of the week:

"Humor is a rubber sword – it allows you to make a point without drawing blood."  (Mary Hirsch)


Answer to this week's exercise:

“Penultimate” means “next to last” and does not mean “ultimate.”


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Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation, author, Lynne Truss The Everything Resume Book by Steven Graber
On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction , by William Knowlton Zinsser  The Gregg Reference Manual, by William A. Sabin 
The Elements of Style, by William Strunk, White, E. B. White  How to Take the Fog Out of Business Writing, by Robert Gunning, Richard A. Kallan (Contributor) 

More books on business writing and other business subjects  (available from Amazon.com). 


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