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Tip #478: ...making a comparison...

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Tip #478:  When making a comparison, make certain that both or all the elements being compared are clearly understood by your reader.

For example: "The third-generation computer is better than the second-generation computer." Do not use: "The third -generation computer is better."

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This week’s quiz:

Correct the sentences to make them clearer:

  1. Imitation alligator hide is almost as tough as a real alligator.

  2. Washington is farther from Boston than Philadelphia.

Quote of the week:

"Those people who are uncomfortable in themselves are disagreeable to others." (William Hazlitt, early 18th century English essayist and literary critic)

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Eats, Shoots & Leaves: The Zero Tolerance Approach to Punctuation, author, Lynne Truss The Everything Resume Book by Steven Graber
On Writing Well: The Classic Guide to Writing Nonfiction , by William Knowlton Zinsser  The Gregg Reference Manual, by William A. Sabin 
The Elements of Style, by William Strunk, White, E. B. White  How to Take the Fog Out of Business Writing, by Robert Gunning, Richard A. Kallan (Contributor) 

More books on business writing and other business subjects  (available from Amazon.com). 

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